Friday, November 4, 2011

Irony

Dark hole

Inside this hole,
I die a little everyday.
Oh love! How you have left me distraught!
It rains unceasingly and my tears they flow with it.
My heart still beats.
In slow motion.
Keeping time with my teardrops falling.
I will never love again.
I will never smile again.
But I'd rather die than never have to see you again.

2 comments:

  1. Really sad. And loved how all pain and sorrow culminated at the last line. Brava!

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    Hush! fair maiden,
    Don't you cry.
    Even the dark night passes
    to welcome the morning light.
    Its hard I know, but
    never let one misfortune
    keep you from the one
    that might love you real.
    Hush! fair maiden.
    It gets better.
    ------LenKamei-------

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    1. Beautiful lines. Len Kamei.
      I thoroughly enjoy your posts.

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